Just received your story from a friend and have read all the chapters. Very well written and thought out, I wish I really knew how it was going to come about the getting out timing is the most important thing. I would like to be put on your list to receive the rest of the story as you write it and I have picked up a few ideas from you already. Just starting to put things together  hope I'm not to late.

Don

Hi Bruce,

Chapters 11 and 12 kept me glued to my computer last night as I read them both twice. Obviously you and Sara make a good team in this novel. I don't know what you had to rewrite in Chapter 12 but it was one of the best yet and left me with a good feeling and a sigh of relief when they made it to the retreat and how they saved Joan and Michael.

You both have a way of bringing your characters alive and making them real just like Mark and Eric.

Thank you very much for a great inspirational and instructional story that I can identify with both logically and emotionally.

Chapter 6 Comment - Another great chapter, Bruce! You are giving me a pit in my stomach. I don’t know if it’s just me still not being 100% or not. There’s always so much to do and never enough time to do it, especially right now.

Can’t wait for the next chapter, Bruce!

Chapter 4 Comment - Bruce,
To be quite frank, your novel has slid from a thought provoking tale about the finacial insecurity of our nation and it's people to racist imagery which is exactly like that of the KKK, ie the "blacks" will rape our white women.

While I agree that crime and pack mentality could become major problems in the event our social structures are compromised, I don't think it is or should be race driven. Plenty of bad white people out there and good people regardless of their race or ethnicity.

I'll thank you to stop sending me any updates. I have read enough.  Please remove me from your mailing list for this novel.

Best regards,
Chad
Bruce "Buckshot" Hemming's Comment - I gladly removed you from the advanced notification of chapters list. You missed the whole point of chapter 4. Racism is a manufactured belief of our society. Chapter 3 explains the Hidden Agenda of the Frankfurt School. The Marxists children and students teach these belief's all through our society. Hence all of our social unrest today. They want all ethnic groups to be separate and to hate all others. It is a part of their master plan to bring America down and swing us towards their ways and belief's. Their goal is to make America an extension of their country.

 America is made up of just about every kind of ethnic group. We stopped being whatever it was from where we came from, like German or Swedish or Spanish and just became American's when we all came to America and became a citizen. That is what made us strong. We were united as a Nation. The only way to bring us down was to separate all of us into groups so we could no longer work together as a whole nation. Together we stand, divided we fall. Look around you, do you see everyone working together to unite our nation and make it a better country? No, you see special interest groups and lobbyist's that have their own interests and agendas. Everyone is backed into their own little corners. We are now a splintered society. We are falling apart just as Russia did.

Chapter 6 Comment - Hi buckshot, I dig you're book so far. it's down to earth and shows what people can be like in a situation such as this one. Still many of things but it does show how asinine people can be when serious situations confront them. Thanks for posting this.

   John

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